Complain Letter

In the assignment below I was asked to write a complain letter about mail or shipments being late or damaged. When thinking of this topic I could relate my own experience to it because I haven’t had to best mail delivery service at my house. I think the letter communicates what it was intended to very well. I get right to the point and I come off as angry and frustrated. I am respectable to the recipient.

Dear US Postal Service,

My name is Lucas Fisher and I’m writing this letter to the manager at the Marshall, Minnesota location for the USPS. Recently I have been receiving packages that I ordered from Amazon. These packages are arriving in terrible shape and what looks like to be totally mishandled through the shipping process. They deliverers are dropping the cardboard packages in the snow by my mailbox, so when I have time to get the package after work it is usually buried in the snow and damaged. If you could please clear up the mishandling of mail with your employees it would be greatly appreciated. I don’t want to have to take this to someone above you. 

Thank you,

Lucas Fisher